Kayaking Trip - Narrative

Everything was falling apart. Everyone wasn’t safe here no one was, everyone was gone one by one and we didn’t know how. Emma was young she use to get told stories like fiction stories. She didn’t believe in them until everything fell in pieces. Her mother told her to run as far as you can and to never stop. She was devastated, depressed, nervous so she kept on running and never stopped. She met 3 people that she never saw in her life. Their names were Julie, Lucas, and Maya, they were walking near a lake it was called Lake Champlain.

That lake would lead you somewhere where nobody would ever find you. So they when in their kayaks and started kayaking down the lake. They were spending their lives without food, they were losing hope thinking they couldn’t survive. The sun was setting down and they kayaked near this grass with lots of trees surrounded. They were peacefully asleep until…. Emma woke up she could hear footsteps walking around, she heard noises so she woke up everyone and told them to hurry up and start kayaking. One of them saw them and said “Hey you everyone over here”. They looked furious, angry, scary, they had their huge guns in their hands they were getting ready to shoot.

They quickly ran to the kayaks and started kayaking fast to get away. The others said “Look they're getting away”. But they were too fast for them so the people with the guns walked away. They knew that they will come back but they didn’t know so they kept on kayaking. 3 days have been past and they were scared, worried, depressed but they wouldn’t give up. They didn’t see those people again so they were safe, so they kept on kayaking and kayaking, and kayaking and finally they found land. They kayaked so fast and when they got in land there was heaps of people their, so they thought that maybe they escaped as well.

Everyone was safe but they weren’t safe for long. To be continued….

Samoan Warrior - Extension/Narrative Story

As you can see the yr 5&6 Extension students have been creating our own pacific artworks by using

hyperstudio! We were given a task to create our own warrior and our own back round. So as you

can see my artwork is done and now I am just animating my animation!

Long ago in 1543 in the islands of Samoa there was a newborn baby, who was raised by his parents. So they decided, to name him Alepati. Alepati’s father was the leader of their tribe and, ever since Alepati was born Raitaku the leader of the other tribe wanted him gone. So before Alepati was born Alepati’s father made a deal with Raitaku. Raitaku said “In 18 years time on Alepati’s birthday I shall return”.

Over the years, Alepati’s father made weapons out of stone and wood, to fight Raitaku when he returned. Alepati’s father taught him how to stand strong and fight when danger comes ahead. As years went by, Alepati turned 18 years old, and sadly his father died. Alepati tried to stay strong, but standing strong without his father was the hardest thing Alepati ever had to do.

When Alepati was growing up he changed. His eyes were light hazel brown eyes frowned whenever he thought of his father. And he lived in a small village in the islands of Samoa.  He was intelligent, brave, and fearless. He had light black hair and he had incredibly strong muscles and lots of strength. Alepati was now the leader of his tribe.

One day, strange noises could be heard in the forest. Alepati's heart was suddenly pounding fast.  That's when he knew he was in deep danger. Suddenly he saw warriors from an enemy tribe. Alepati was shocked,  furious and nervous because he didn't want his people to get hurt. Alepati quickly gathered all of his people and gave them weapons to fight.

Everywhere that Alepati looked, there were people fighting. Everyone stood back to let Alepati and Raitaku Fight. But Alepati refused to fight Raitaku. But Alepati had no choice but to fight but only for his people, his home, for his dad! Alepati had cuts on his stomach and arm and they were bleeding painfully!

They were still fighting and fighting and Raitaku tried to end it with Alepati! But then Alepati put his sword out and it went straight in the middle of Raitaku’s stomach which was where his heart was…… And from now on everyone remembered that day, and there were no danger at all!

Writing a narrative!!!!

In 1984 three children were born, raised and their parents loved them so much they named them Lia, Max and Jake. Lia was a sweet little girl but she was the youngest out of her brothers. Max was the oldest but he always got in trouble. Jake was the second oldest, he was always shy around everyone but also he was very smart. As time went on Lia, Max and Jake was always wanting to go to Mount Ngauruhoe and travel with her mum and dad. But they were to small to travel on their own so they waited until they got older. Time went on and they were old enough to travel to where they wanted to go.

So they got their things ready and then went to bed so they can go to Mount Ngauruhoe. At 1:00 in the bright early morning they all woke up and on their way to Mount Ngauruhoe. They were walking and walking until Lia` got exhausted so, she collapsed on the ground and she couldn’t move. So her brothers pulled her near a tree and, so they all rested until they had enough strength to stand back up on their feet.

Max woke up and it was the middle of the night he couldn't see anything all he could see, was red eyes shaped like a wolf's body. Until he noticed that they were wild wolves but he wasn't so sure, so he stood up and they kept on coming closer and closer. Until they ran and they sounded like wild wolves to him so he woke up his brother and sister, and told them “get your stuff hurry we have to go NOW”.

They were running and running until Lia couldn't see anything in her sight ,so she ran another direction and then she realized that her brothers weren't with her. She was crying and crying and ever wondering if her brothers will find her. And that's when her brothers realized that she wasn't with them too so they had to look for her fast. Max found footprints so he followed them, him and his brother and it leaded to a cave.

So they went in it was pitch black, they couldn't see anything but they saw her bag and then they saw her. But she had a cut on her leg so that's when things got harder. So they lifted her up and kept on walking to get to Mount Ngauruhoe. They were finally their they actually made it to Mount Ngauruhoe. And their they were high in the sky near fluffy clouds. And that's when their journey ended the end.