Ata's Camp Retell Review!!!

If you want to read or look at Ata’s Camp Retell here's the link-  Ata’s Camp Retell

In her 1st paragraph, she was talking about how the wind was too strong and it, was flattening the tents. In Ata’s 2nd paragraph she is talking about our camp groups. And our camps groups were called, Kind Krushers, Kindonaters, Kinda Crazy, Kind Legends, KInd Krew and the Kind Kings. And our names are like that because, it is the meaning of kindness. Because our topic at school is, making KindNess go Viral.

So on Ata’s 3rd paragraph she was writing about her group, which is the Kindonaters. She was talking about who her leaders were, She was also talking about what song they were dancing too. And how long they had to practise, practise and practise.

So we are now on Ata’s 4th paragraph, Wow there's so many paragraphs so let's get to it. So she was talking about our camp activities and what we have done.

On her other paragraph which is the 5th one she is talking about how she felt in her own tent. She was also talking about that the wind was too strong, it even knocked over her own tent!!!

So we are on her 6th paragraph. On her 6th paragraph she is talking about our Camp Concert. Also she is talking about, that every camp item played a little game, before each team started their, dance item.

So we are on the last paragraph which is the 7th one. This one is a really special one. The last paragraph is Ata’s thank you note to all the parents, and teachers who helped us during camp. So yeah that's all for now bye!!!!!

Advice column

Duffy Assembly!!!!

On Tuesday the February 9th we went to a Duffy assembly in our school hall. We were walking in a straight line and heading off to go to the Duffy assembly. We walked into the hall and sat in a line that was a little bit in a zigzag line. It was too hot I couldn't even breath, but I sat down anyways. When we were watching the Duffy show it was like time traveling you know like, the Doctor Who book. But far I was really excited. Time went on and the Duffy show was finally finished, I learned a lot from the Duffy show. Because its kinda weird but what I learnt from the Duffy show, is always read wherever you are because, it takes you places you have never been before, you might not get what I mean but you will figure it out anyways well that's the end see you later!!!!

My recount rubric

On Monday the 7th of September on the school field we had cross country. The time came where we had to run our fastest.

People got ready and went into their house colours. Their was some changes on cross country day. We had to had a early lunch time and waited until the bell rang. RING RING RING, I was zooming straight to class and lined up to go straight to the courts.

We sat down on the ground , waiting until the teachers said a couple of things. First it was the year 1 boys to run, They were all pumped up I could tell on the face that they,  were ready to race as hard as they could. Parents in the crowed cheering for their daughter or son hoping they will come 1st.

The time came where we had to line up and run. The principal said “on your mark get set GO!!!” . I was running as fast as I could I never stopped. I was zooming, running, sweat was coming down on my face. I was getting exhausted and exhausted every time I took 1 step. We went in a straight line ran around the cones through the gate. And went through the revolting mud. The mud felt squishy and yuck it splashed onto my feet and I nearly lost my balance. I was running and running as fast as I could.

We had a cup of water to make us calm down. I was puffing and puffing because my legs were exhausted. We sat down and watched the year 8 girls run. My feet were covered in mud it was awful. We lined up again to go back to class. The students at Pt England school was colourful because we were dressed in our house colours. The colours were red, green, yellow and blue. After cross country I went back to class to get my bag and shoes and went back home from there. I felt cheerful because I came in 6th place and it was the best day I have ever had.