This is a record of my time at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.
Hi PaigeGood effort with your character descriptions. Keep working hard to 'show' not 'tell' what your characters are like. Take care not to be too repetitive with your sentences e.g. 'cheeky look', 'serious look' etc.
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Hi Paige
ReplyDeleteGood effort with your character descriptions. Keep working hard to 'show' not 'tell' what your characters are like. Take care not to be too repetitive with your sentences e.g. 'cheeky look', 'serious look' etc.