Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Paige's Extension Narrative - Polynesian Warriors


Long ago in 1543 there was a newborn baby, who was raised by his parents. So they decided, to name him Alepati. Alepati’s father was the leader of their tribe and, ever since Alepati was born Raitaku the leader of the other tribe wanted him gone. So before Alepati was born Alepati’s father made a deal with Raitaku. Raitaku said “In 18 years time on Alepati’s birthday I shall return”.

Over the years, Alepati’s father made weapons out of stone and wood, to fight Raitaku when he returned. Alepati’s father taught him how to stand strong and fight when danger comes ahead. As years went by, Alepati turned 18 years old, and sadly his father died. Alepati tried to stay strong, but standing strong without his father was the hardest thing Alepati ever had to do. When Alepati closed his eyes he dreamed about making the world a better place for everyone.   

As Alepati grew up he changed a lot. The brave young warrior's light hazel brown eyes frowned whenever he thought of his father. And he lived in a small village in Samoa. He was intelligent, brave, and fearless. He had light black hair and he had incredibly strong muscles and lots of strength. Alepati was now the leader of his tribe.

One day, strange noise's could be heard in the forest. Alepati's heart was suddenly pounding fast. That's when he knew he was in deep danger. Suddenly he saw warriors from an enemy tribe. Alepati was shocked, furious and nervous because he didn't want his people to get hurt. Alepati quickly gathered all of his people and gave them weapons to fight.

Everywhere that Alepati looked, there were people fighting. Even worse were kids were screaming and crying begging them to stop. Alepati and Raitaku were fighting. But Alepati refused to fight Raitaku. Raitaku tripped Alepati and then Raitaku pinned Alepati to the ground and faced his weapon towards Raitaku. 

Raitaku gave up he said to himself “I am sorry father for letting you down I just wanted to make everything right”. So Alepati closed his eyes and heard a whisper in his head saying “Son don’t ever give up you are stronger then this get up and finish it”. Alepati said “Fighting is not the answer to this it will just cause more danger and everyone will be gone and there will be nobody left”.

Everyone agreed to Alepati, everyone except for Raitaku. Alepati said “Come on Raitaku join us to make everything right, fighting is never the answer so join us please”. Raitaku said “Never". Alepati and Raitaku were near a cliff until Raitaku lost balanced and then tripped over a rock and fell down! But Alepati was sad but happy at the same time. By then everyone was happy and there was no danger at all!

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